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Saturday, October 13, 2007
Time Speaks
The sun sets effortlessly on the horizon,
paints the sky scene vividly.
So bright, all the reds and yellows
in the blazing horizon,
as if the sky was on fire.
Time slips so slowly away.
"Another day, another day..."
A small voice whispers,
still and low, quiet
against the loud rush of the sea.
Waves crashing violently,
thrashing the shoreline,
threatening to tear it all away.
"Another day, another day..."
This voice has no body,
no mind. No form whatsoever.
People walking busily to and fro,
not taking time to sit and listen,
sit and watch.
Continue on. Don't look back. Walk away.
"Another day, another day..."
Time continues.
We go on.
Never take time to stop and listen,
stop and watch.
Still the small voice whispers
as we go, always, on our way.
"Another day, another day..."
The hills are reflected in dark water.
Make no nevermind.
Continue on.
Boats floating toward the light,
vessels of fallen souls.
Never looked back, kept walking away.
"Another day, another day..."
Time stops.
Sun fades.
Can't keep going.
Nowhere to run.
No place to hide.
Time laughs in your face:
"Another day, an--"
Nevermore.
January 15, 2007
Tuesday, July 31, 2007
Dawning Midnight
Dawning Midnight
Shady blue veiled in smog...
Star shines piercing beyond the curtain,
surviving past the misty haze.
It radiates its glittery flare:
a single star, the lone pioneer.
July 31st, 2007
written by Auron
Wednesday, July 25, 2007
Age of Love
Age of Love
One Woman:
crumpled with age,
silver-gray hair tied back,
face lined from years of worry,
of failing health and mental anguish
bent the corners of her mouth into a smile
as she looked into the fawn-colored young eyes before her.
One Child:
newly born,
soft-skinned and pink,
just opening her tiny eyes to the world,
new lights and sounds and strange people
found the face of her grandmother and smiled
as she squinted into the emerald-hued, wrinkly eyes before her.
That moment burned in time itself,
for it knew no greater love than this:
one old and one new,
and for the first time they stared back into one another's eyes,
their very hearts, beating together as one.
July 25th, 2007
dedicated to my Nanny
Sunday, July 22, 2007
Wondering...
Wondering...
Why is it that stars glitter silver in the night sky?
How do birds know to fly south for winter?
What tells the heart that it's right,
...when the head says it's definitely wrong?
Who draws the line between
what is real and what is not?
...And just why does he have such power?
Where is Heaven?
How far does the apple really fall from the tree?
...And how can you tell?
...And why is it that tree in particular?
When does God actually sleep?
...Or does He?
And if a tree falls in the woods and you're not around to hear it--
How much wood would a woodchuck actually chuck?
...Nevermind.
(This is what happens when my mind wanders...)
(These are my daydreams...)
(I call it my life.)
July 22, 2007
Wednesday, July 18, 2007
Collaboration, Part III (Halley's Comet)
Halley’s Comet
Sky lit up with sparks ignited by golden flames,
a silver moon shivers against the crisp autumn breeze.
Shifting clouds begin to part and time comes to a stand-still:
a show, long-awaited, now begins to unfold.
Shooting high, amongst the moon and stars,
a blinding ball leads a flaming blaze;
fallen rocks, then a glowing tail
seen through misty haze.
Blazing sparks light up the night
as friction scars the fallen sprites.
Starry fragments glitter, forever fading silently into darkness…
The spectacle passes an awestruck audience,
seen and gone, their intrigue fades.
Clouds circle in, enclosing the shooting star,
and it takes its last bow...
and fades dimly away.
Seventy-five years in the making…
fast away it flies, growing dimmer by the second…
a world it has passed, many more it must come by.
July 16th, 2007
co-written with Auron
The Entity
The Entity
A door hung open, a draft blown in.
The creeks of the chair,
the crackles of the flames,
dampens the bliss-less silence within.
sparks fly, fire erupts,
the watcher's stare still remains frozen stuck.
Fingers long hardened, lay curled at rest.
Droughty eyes, gazed endlessly into a searing blaze.
A visage of fear incarnate looked on,
like time did once upon his life.
An eerie smile grinned eternally across his face.
Pain: numbed his heart cold, driven his mind insane.
But sealed an eternal smile upon his face.
The suffering that wrought the end of countless others,
brought him nothing but the unsettling sense of security.
Betrayed by fate it self, reason dictates none he must trust.
Tainted his past was, he looks beyond to a darker future.
Having lived through years of cold and harsh winters,
and thundering showers of rain.
A last storm now knocks upon his gates.
As hope begins to dwindle, the mist begins to disappear.
In a moment frozen in time, it all becomes clear,
for the hailed one, must live to see...
...to see it hail at the end.
July 18th, 2007
written by Auron
Saturday, July 14, 2007
The Humble Gesture
The Humble Gesture
The songs echoes,
the siren sings,
A barren chamber now filled.
The curtain rises; the light dims.
An impatient audience roars,
claps and cheers abound.
The artist enters; gleefully smiling,
fingers twitching, hands raised; the gesture begins.
Rope snaps, a weight falls.
The artist now dead, the shows hope now forever lost.
July 14th, 2007
written by Auron
Wednesday, July 11, 2007
Collaboration, Part II (Piercing Green)
Piercing Green
Through broken window panes:
scattered glass and shattered dreams.
A vaguely seen sun sets,
ushering in a new night
and newer dreams.
A dance as old as time itself—
the moon rises...
and the sun falls.
Silver stars shine,
and the blue sky fades daily away.
The world refuses to cease
its trip around the sun;
and so time goes on.
Blithe refusal—a blatant rebellion—
her moon-bathed body lies helplessly:
blood-soaked and strangled,
olive eyes—glazed—but still looking onward,
watching, waiting,
...gone.
Hopelessly anticipating
the return of reason; the question of why...
...Am I forgotten?
A blanket of a million stars
hiding the night’s ugly secret;
silence…
A veiled shadow stands guard
over the soul of the broken—
black against black
the night cloaking fate:
a shadow, now sealed.
Tears swell: a memory recalled...
a touch of grace,
a glint of hope...
The last voice it heard:
“We don’t want you no more.”
A single drop falls…
the earth stained with sadness:
a misery invoked, pain surrendered unwillingly—
a life taken, not for granted, but gone forevermore,
one that will never again look upon the sun with blissful joy
or gaze longingly at the moon, wishing she had wings to fly.
Grief-stricken, sadness now abliss.
That single drop falls into the teary abyss.
In the darkness—misery intertwined with hope—
the light will come once more:
the day will dawn again for sure.
...But will night follow again?
July 11th, 2007
co-written with Auron
Saturday, July 7, 2007
Collaboration, Part I (Blasphemy Incarnate)
as hope returns triumphant and renewed.
Softly woven fibers of life woven together like fate’s hand:
silvery strings, dripping dewdrops of gold,
bright rays shimmer through as new becomes old.
Time slips...but life moves on;
streams twist and destiny shifts, yet still we live on.
Sunset reveals timeless a truth:
never tomorrows, and yesterdays, never again...
But dawn still rekindles, an old truth forgotten;
that everyday does still begin life renewed.
A page, yet unfolded; a rock, yet unturned;
a book long undone, sealed away;
a ship unsunken, a port veered away...
All these things, left unfinished;
to be long forgotten--broken by time's own hand.
A tragedy, self-incurred; a curse, self-invoked,
time passed away; a priceless treasure forever stolen.
The web woven, hope and fate intertwined, in destiny's evil lair.
July 4th, 2007
Sunday, May 20, 2007
Red Balloon
shines bright in
Gleaming Sun,
bounces happily in
Summer Breeze,
white ribbon tied to
Child's Small Arm
Winter Woods
against silver sky.
Cold wind whispers
through fallen branches,
"Come closer."
Untitled (L i f e)
As the sun begins its journey through the vast, open expanse called blue sky
the birds start their sing-along-song, reminding us that the day has begun
and so we b e g i n
and the butterfly soars and brushes so softly against the clouds
its wings fluttering lightly as the heart does with the touch of a lover’s hand
no boundaries
no limits
it knows neither up nor down, nor left nor right
for there is only time and life and it knows only that it must l i v e
and the wind sweeps across the land, carrying away all the voices
all the words you can’t say
you don’t want to hear
and scooping them all up in its long-fingered hands
and pushing them to the far edge of the world
far, f a r away
But when the day is done,
when time stands still and there is nothing left to think--
or hear--
or speak--
(deafening)
S i l e n c e becomes the loudest sound of all...
And the moon whispers softly,
G o o d n i g h t
On Silence
Deafening silence
steals sound away
mouth moving...
but not saying--
not speaking--
no words...
Quiet.
for Dee
Tuesday, March 13, 2007
Reflections
- Snowday: This piece was inspired by watching the snowfall when we were out of school for a snowday. As I watched the flakes fall to the ground, my mind wandered back to a memory from several years ago of my very first snowday. At this time, I was learning about ways to use description and dialogue to make the story interesting. I used several of these elements in this piece, describing the snow and creating a voice for each of my characters.
- Sunset: This piece was inspired by sitting on my back porch one night and watching the sun as it faded into the horizon. I wanted to capture the beauty and magnificence of it all while still maintaining a certain simplicity in the language to make it easier for all ages to relate to. When I wrote this, I was learning the importance of creating a tone and sticking to it throughout the piece; in this poem, I tried to maintain a sense of wonder and reflectiveness as I described the sunset.
- Color Dance: This poem has somewhat of a strange inspiration. The assignment was to write a poem about how we thought colors would act if they were human, but when I tried to sit down and write it, my mind went completely blank. That night, I was babysitting my younger cousins, who were coloring at the kitchen table as I worked on homework. The radio was on, and one of them got up out of nowhere and just started to dance and twirl around with the music. (It just so happened that the song was "YMCA" and she was wearing a yellow shirt, which I used in one of the lines in the poem.) This made me wonder: what kind of music would each color listen to? What kind of dance would each color do? I started to write, and "Color Dance" was finished in ten minutes! At the time, I was learning how to create personality in a character through description and dialogue, so I tried not to actually say how each color felt; rather, I tried to create those feelings by saying how each color danced.
- The Water Is Wide: I wrote this poem after hearing a song by Garth Brooks titled "The River". In the song, he sings about life being like a river, "ever changing as it flows," and each person being a vessel in that river, "that must follow where it goes." The title was borrowed from a movie about a Low Country teacher in the 1970s who inspired a whole culture to better itself, starting with its children. At the time I wrote this, I was learning about using metaphors and similes in writing. As I wrote this poem, I found myself thinking back to all the people in my life--family, friends, teachers--that have inspired me, and I used the metaphor of a ship in the distance to represent these people. The water in this poem is representative of life and how it never stays the same, but keeps changing with the times.
- Chess Match: This piece is actually two poems, but the central idea of a simple game of chess is carried from one into the other. I wanted to try a two-part poem, and I was somewhat surprised by the results because the two poems did not use the same formats or styles, but I feel that what tied them together best was that I wrote one from the perspective of the players and one from the perspective of the pieces. At the time I wrote this piece, I was learning several techniques: first of all, how to describe a character using actions and dialogue; secondly, how to use different forms of poetry. The original "Chess Match" was written using the first technique to describe my chess partner. "Chess Match, Part Deux" utilized the classic pantoum format, reinforcing certain important ideas through repetition and rhythm.
Part Two--Process of Revision
The poems in this selection did not undergo any major revisions, although I did tweak a few rhymes or added or took away words to fit the rhythm of the piece. The most revision came with writing "Snowday."
In "Snowday," I had to revise several times--first to remove passive voice and some excess repetition, then several more times to add in descriptions and reinforce characters' voices. I had to try to come up with multiples ways of saying "snow," as that word appeared too many times in my first draft. I also revised to use the BrushStrokes techniques we were learning at the time, varying my sentence structures to make the piece more interesting and entertaining to read. Perhaps the biggest problem I had in writing "Snowday" was trying to create a specific voice for each character, be it the "caring-but-overbearing" mother, the "more-adult-than-child" brother, or the "overly cautious" toddler with the wild imagination. I also tried to maintain a slightly subliminal sarcasm throughout the piece, going back through my story several times to add this in.
Part Three--Learning From Your Classmates- Power of Vivid Descriptions
In reading John's piece about witnessing the brutal murder of a police officer while in Italy, I felt as if I had been standing right beside the narrator as the whole scene unfolded. His descriptions made the scene come alive, and all the sounds and smells in the story seemed so real. I tried to capture this in my writing as well, especially in "Snowday" because I wanted the reader to be able to put him or herself in the place of my character and experience the story with that character. I think John did a very good job of mastering this technique, and he will be one of the many writers I will look to as I try to work on this in my writing.
http://johnscreativewritingblog.blogspot.com/2007/02/just-another-rainy-day.html
- Creating a Strong Mood in Poetry
In reading several of Katie's and Emily's poems, I learned that it is important to be able to create a strong mood within the reader as he or she reads your work. Since poetry is usually much shorter than prose, it takes a lot of talent and effort to be able to evoke such strong feelings in one's readers. However, I think both of these writers have mastered this technique, through diction as well as description. In their poems, if the main character feels hatred or passion toward another subject, the reader can clearly distinguish the emotion and feels just as much of that emotion toward the antagonist in the piece as the main character does. This really adds to the reader's experience--to be able to walk away from reading and say, "Wow, I actually felt that."
http://emidilweegomefofers.blogspot.com/2007/02/letter-to-you.html
http://ktsuntitledblog.blogspot.com/2007/01/devils-hand.html
- Power of Brevity
In reading Dean's piece entitled "Wisdom," I learned that brevity in a piece of writing can be a very effective thing. Dean used vivid descriptions to fully personify the character of Wisdom in only three lines, and the reader can fully visualize the character, despite the very brief nature of the piece. I think it is essential to be able to leave certain aspects of a character to one's own imagination; I believe that makes the reader think. However, in this description of the character, there is much left unsaid that the reader can speculate upon without losing the character's identity. The brevity of the piece also evokes the strong sense of honor and nostalgia in the reader, being able to picture him or herself in that very room at that very time with Wisdom.
Monday, March 12, 2007
Snowday!
I had just turned three years old; my little brothers were still in diapers (babies that they were...). That morning, I woke up and looked out the window like I always did--my morning ritual, my simple way of greeting the new day. Every day before, the sun was either wide awake or still snoozing behind the clouds, too lazy to rise and shine. This time, though, I was greeted not by the sun or the rain, but by this white...stuff...falling from the sky--or, what I perceived was the sky, as the...stuff...had completely covered the ground, making it look like a giant, puffy white cloud.
"Snow?"
Sunday, February 25, 2007
Sunset
New colors are invented every night
as the sun sinks deep into the horizon.
Nature's perfect palette,
the end of yet another day,
another sunset.
Each one is different, yet each is the same;
Each means one thing to one person
...and still another to the next;
Each sheds new light and the hope for
still another tomorrow,
one more sunset,
one more painted canvas,
signed in Mother Nature's swirling hand
Maybe it's just Father Time's way
of saying Goodnight
until the stars shimmer brightly
above a symphony of crickets.
January 29th, 2007
Friday, February 9, 2007
Color Dance
Red begins to dance the rave
to a psychedelic beat.
Lime green starts an electric slide--
clapping and moving its feet.
Teal tangos a minute or two,
dragging its toes along.
Yellow discos the YMCA
to that "totally 80s" song!
White waltzes a while,
so graceful and smooth,
while blue trots out a classic swing,
showing off all its moves.
Orange does a crazy jive,
jumping all the while.
Black prefers a fast-paced tap--
a classic, rhythmic style.
Emerald tries an Irish jig
to a bagpipe melody.
Pink performs a beautiful ballet,
pirouetting gracefully.
Coral favors a classic shag
to a lively beach-inspired sound.
Brown likes a country square dance:
"Swing your partner round and round!"
Maroon does a creative Macarena,
clogging rhythmically.
Violet likes a little jazz
to stir up the dance scene.
...But there's one lonely color who never reaches the floor...
Gray sits all alone,
in a corner,
near the door.
Wednesday, January 31, 2007
The Water is Wide
I stand at the water's edge,
looking at my own swaying reflection
in the ebb-and-flow swirling seawater.
Who am I?
What will I become?
There is a small vessel in the distance,
moving ever closer to the sinking sun
on the horizon.
I watch that boat.
And it knows there are sandbars
and unseen dangers
that threaten
its way.
Still, it keeps going.
Because, beyond such ever-present dangers
lies its destination
on the Other Side.
Beyond the lurking, silent perils of what it cannot see
lies its goal...
its victory...
its proof that...
...It Can Be Done.
So it keeps going.
The Water is wide,
and even though the danger is always there,
the tiny vessel keeps going.
It steers clear.
It never gives up.
Similar to this vessel, I see my reflection--
Steady now, I am sure of where I will go,
of who I will become.
And I will keep going...
In the face of danger, I will keep going.
I will be somebody.
And I will never give up.
For the Water is wide, and there are so many possibilities--
chances and risks I must take
To reach my destination
on the Other Side.
April 3, 2006
Wednesday, January 24, 2007
Chess Match 2
Chess Match, Part Deux
When one pawn took a look,
the battle lines were clearly drawn.
It had it read, just like a book,
and it gave a little yawn.
The battle lines were clearly drawn;
its nose turned up, its head it shook,
and it gave a little yawn,
and settled back into its nook.
Its nose turned up, its head it shook:
“They’re all brains and no brawn.”
It settled back into its nook,
this quiet little pawn.
“They’re all brains and no brawn!”
It thought it was off the hook,
this quiet little pawn…
but it overlooked a rook!
It thought it was off the hook,
it had it read just like a book…
(but it overlooked a rook)
when one pawn took a look.
January 19, 2007
Chess Match
Chess Match
It couldn't be normal, like Jake or Mike or Zach...
No, it had to be different; stand out:
"Blake," he says with a frown,
so I call him Montana.
He watches quietly, intently,
never saying a word,
never moving a muscle,
(pawn to H3) then laughs...
"You learn fast!"
His dark, smooth brown eyes
focus deep, deeper into mine,
trying to read my next move,
intimidation (he hopes) to deter the end result,
as my knight finds its way to F7.
"Check." "I'm trapped!" He's surprised?
After all, Montana taught me
all I know..."Good game."
(Okay, he let me win that time, he confesses, eyes filled with mystery...)
"But no mercy next round!"
January 19, 2007
....Just Another Ordinary Day
Hope you'll stick around, ya know, check back every now and again to see what's going on in my world: The Land of Nowhere, Halfway Between Hicktown and the Boondocks.
I'm not promising anything, partially because of my philosophy that (most) promises are meant to be broken (it's only a matter of time!), but maybe you'll be able to relate to at least parts of "whatever's goin' on!"
All for now, but remember...the stars still shine bright in Dixie, even though the clouds may sometimes get in the way.